Internal draft — MondragonTech ops.
Evidence-based site audit for outreach prep. Not client-facing unless
you choose to share excerpts.
Snapshot
| Mobile-friendly |
Viewport present; IONOS / DudaOne builder shell
(SiteType: DUDAONE, assets on website-editor.net) —
adapts, but content is unfinished
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| Clear primary CTA |
Header shows “Call us: 909-320-8675” but no
tel: links found on home HTML; homepage body still
shows placeholder Phone: 555-555-5555
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| Contact path obvious |
Real NAP on /contact and /contact-2
(email, PO Box, second phone); nav has both “Find Us” and
“Contact 2” — form only on Contact 2
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| Speed / feel |
Thin builder site published Apr 2024; default logo
myLogo.png; gallery stock blanks
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| Trust |
About is instructional builder copy (“Just click on the text
box…”); Gallery is six blank placeholder tiles; one real
landscape photo on home
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| SEO basics |
Generic page titles (Home, About Us,
Gallery); no useful meta description observed
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| First impression |
Custom domain is live, but the site still looks like an unfinished
builder template — including a fake 555 number on the homepage
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Top issues
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Homepage still has builder placeholder contact: “Simple Title,”
mymail@mailservice.com, and
555-555-5555 next to a real header phone
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About Us is unfinished instructional copy — visitor learns nothing
about the company
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Gallery is empty blank tiles — no project proof for a landscaper
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Broken contact IA: Find Us + Contact 2; real NAP buried on secondary
pages
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Social icons point to bare facebook.com / twitter.com / youtube.com
(not business profiles); logo still theme default
Opportunities
What a better site should do for this business:
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Lead with Patritti Landscaping · Fontana and a
tappable Call (909) 320-8675 + Request a quote
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Replace placeholder Home / About / Gallery with services, proof, and
one clean Contact page
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Use the real contact pieces already on site (Arnulfo email, PO Box,
office/mobile phones)
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Keep Hybrid updates so they don’t have to finish the IONOS builder
themselves
Suggested scope
Package
Starter — $999 (default). Rebuild $1,799 only if they want fuller
5-page IA + photo gallery migration
Pages / features
Home, Services (or Gallery), Contact — click-to-call, Maps link,
quote path; retire Find Us / Contact 2 confusion
Out of scope for v1
Inventing CSLB numbers/reviews, photography shoot, logo redesign,
paid ads
Rough timeline
1–2 weeks after deposit + content/photos
Update model after launch
Hybrid + Care ($79/mo) for seasonal copy/photo swaps
Call talking points
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Your domain is live, but Home still shows builder text and a
555 number next to a real phone in the header — that
undercuts trust before anyone calls.
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About and Gallery are still template (“click to edit” / blank images)
— a Starter site can lead with services + proof + one clear quote
path.
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You already have the right contact pieces (Arnulfo email, PO Box,
office/mobile) — they just need one clean Contact page.
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Pitch: done-for-you static site; Care handles updates by email so you
don’t finish the builder yourself.
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CTA: 15-minute walkthrough —
https://calendly.com/jmondragontech/website-walkthrough
Notes for demo
- Phone (primary): (909) 320-8675
- Phone (second, on contact pages): (909) 414-5333
- Email: Arnulfo@patrittilandscaping.com
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Mailing: P.O. Box 310157, Fontana, CA 92331 (Contact 2)
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Maps link on contact: 15519 Iris Dr, Fontana, CA 92335 (note ZIP
inconsistency vs PO Box — do not invent which is “office”)
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Visual direction: deep greens + warm soil/stone; outdoor hero
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Stack correction vs older tracker note: live builder is
IONOS/Duda, not GoDaddy
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Do not invent reviews, CSLB license numbers, or branded social URLs